Overflow
March 25, 2010
I see the sun, brimming from the edges of the pit I’m in.
The fall was long, the well was deep.
But to my luck, it was shallow, and the water only reached up to my elbows.
I am cold, cold in the dark waters of this sunken ground.
But I can feel the walls around me.
The stones have grooves that hold me up, and I won’t fall deep within.
I am slipping, into the darkness, and I can’t hold on any longer.
I am too tired and weary
I am bleeding against the walls of my strength, and slipping away.
I am gone, away into the light.
I have found my peace, and now everything is alright.
I am free, to fly the skies, in search of another journey, and kiss the past goodbye.
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March 25, 2010 at 8:37 pm
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March 25, 2010 at 8:52 pm
This was beautiful, Pavi.
If I had half the eloquence, I could have written this couple of months ago because what you feel is something I can relate to easily.
I am glad you found your equilibrium and your peace and I hope you never have to go back to times like that
March 25, 2010 at 10:24 pm
strong and beautiful!
I am gone, away into the light.
I have found my peace, and now everything is alright.
I am free, to fly the skies, in search of another journey, and kiss the past goodbye.
never forget this..
March 26, 2010 at 7:50 am
I love those last 3 lines so much
March 26, 2010 at 2:33 pm
Beautiful!